中学生写作指导 、别糟践它 ，还有液态水。金黄铺满了稻田洒满了枝头。有海洋，它真的生了气停止了自转
，昼夜不停地交换使白天不过分热 ，千万别污染它
，
This report makes me to realize that how valuable our earth is.
这使我认识到我们地球有多么珍贵!
Everyday, we can see sunrise and sunset.
我们每天都可以看到日出日落
。他们估计它的平均温度约在0℃～40℃之间 。别破坏它!
If One day, it is really angry and stop rotation, that will have be a disaster for us human being.
如果有那么一天 ，
Autumn is the harvest season , the paddy fields and trees are covered with golden color.
秋天是丰收的季节，
It is a report about the new planet which holds possibility for life.
这是一篇关于发现了一颗有生命可能性的星球的报告 。
It means that it must always show its same face to its sun, and that while one side would be too fiercely hot to support life, the other side would be too cold.
这就意味着它面对红矮星的一面会太热不适合生命体而背对红矮星的一面则会很寒冷 。代号为“Gliese 581C” 。不会自转。让我们大家用自己的爱来好好保护宇宙中这颗唯一的地球吧 ，夜晚不过分冷 。
We should cherish it, instead of polluting it, spoiling it or even destroying it.
我们要珍惜它 ，
Most important of all, it’s an earth-like planet. There might be mountin, sea and liquid water.
最重要的是 ，
The day and night keeps on exchanging. It’s not too hot in the daytime while not to cold at night.
一天早晚有变化 ，
We could experience changes through the four seasons of one year.
一年四季有变化。这颗星球和地球非常相似
，它围绕着红矮星Gliese 581运行。
So, let us protect our earth with our love, making it better and more harmonious.
所以 ，
In the winter
，我又蹦又跳地回到家 。
It is about 20.5 light years from our earth. They estimated the planet's average temperature at between 0 and 40 degrees Centigrade. It is orbiting the red dwarf star, Gliese 581.
它距地球约20.5光年。